Friday, October 21, 2005

An Assortment of Really Bad Poetry

The First Poem

Behind a mask
Unseen by all
She cries inside
Behind her wall

She tries to speak
The words are stuck
She finds no peace
She has no luck

No one can see
No one can know
The way she feels
Nothing can show

The Second Poem

After the thought
After the dream
Comes so many things
What can they mean?

Who can understand
Who can believe
After the thought
After the dream?


The Third Poem

What does it mean
When they say good-bye?
What does it mean
When you forget to cry?
What does it mean
When you feel alone?
What does it mean
When your poetry sucks?
What does it mean
When you've run out of luck?
What does it mean
When you hear maybe?
What does it mean
When you feel like a baby?



Thank you. Thank you very much.

7 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

What are you talking about.Those poems are beautiful.I liked the third one the best.
You don't give yourself enough credit.you are a great poet.
Awesome poems.
Always Faithful!
Thomas

October 21, 2005 1:56 PM  
Blogger Striped Tree said...

The third one was the worst!

October 21, 2005 2:36 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Why's that? I thought it was good.

Always Faithful !
Thomas

October 21, 2005 3:46 PM  
Blogger Striped Tree said...

I was trying to make it bad.

October 21, 2005 3:58 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Now Why would you do that?Well whenever you try to make something bad it still comes out good.
Always Faithful!
Thomas

October 21, 2005 4:04 PM  
Blogger Striped Tree said...

The second one sounds familiar. Maybe I didn't make that one up.

October 22, 2005 8:03 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Well.Anyway They are great poems.
Great work Michelle.

Always Faithful !
Thomas

October 23, 2005 9:35 PM  

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